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Beta Reading

Ever had a goblin read your writing?

 

As an avid reader, book blogger, fantasy writer, editor, and marketer, I wear many mushroom hats—all of them pertaining to storytelling.

If you need someone to help patch plot holes (I have big sticks and little sticks), hiss at your characters when they step out of line, and screech into the void when something doesn't make sense, I'm your goblin.

About

Jordan graduated with a BA in English and a marketing minor in 2020 and began editing freelance that same year. Following internships with a small press and as a blog writer, she joined the Quill & Crow Publishing House editing team alongside her day job as a library programs coordinator.

 

Eventually, Jordan departed the library field to launch her author-centered business and now helps fellow wordsmiths on their writing quests full-time.

For Jordan's full editing credits, see her editing page!

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Services

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I primarily beta read YA and adult fiction. This includes novels, novellas, and short stories. I have the most experience with fantasy, urban fantasy, paranormal, romance, dystopian, suspense/horror, and literary gothic. I accept works with nearly every type of content, but please include content warnings with your request so I can make an informed decision.

I do not offer beta reading for nonfiction or memoirs, and I will decline work on any project found to have used generative AI. Please see FAQ for more details. If you are unsure whether your writing falls under my expertise, contact me with a description of your work.

New clients are offered a free sample review and beta summary of the first chapter (up to ~3,000 words) for works 50k words or over. Note that this will not reflect the extent of a full beta read, but if you are satisfied with my commenting style, the sample will be used to help determine your final quote.

NOTE

The beta read service is not meant to stand in for developmental editing and will not suggest drastic changes. Though it targets a lot of the same elements and can be an affordable alternative to dev editing, it is a general overview to base your rewrites on rather than a full editorial analysis.

General Read

A General Read is one read-through that notes issues and areas to focus on in revisions. This is recommended for authors who want publishing-focused feedback to implement as they see fit and will not include a follow-up. I will:

  • Screech at plot & logic holes and offer sticks to patch them accordingly.

  • Sniff out narrative & character inconsistencies and poke them until they make sense.

  • Scurry around awkward pacing or confusing passages until they're more confused by me (and shape up).

  • Point and hiss at sections that can be cut or added to.

  • Bonk overused phrases to look out for.

  • Leave gobliny commentary, including all the things that please my eyeballs or make me wail in eternal sadness.

A General Read includes in-document comments addressing the above elements, and a 1-2 page beta reader report listing big-picture structural elements to focus on in revisions.

General Read Pricing

General Guideline

(rounded up after 500 words)

$0.003 per word

20k words — $60

30k words — $90

50k words — $150

70k words — $210

80k words — $240

Detailed Read

A Detailed Read includes all of the same elements as a General Read, with a follow-up read-through to ensure changes have been implemented successfully and to address remaining concerns. This option includes targeted advice on ways to incorporate changes at the author's discretion.

This includes suggestions for:

  • Sections and/or chapters to trim or move elsewhere for better pacing and clarity.

  • Adjustments when dialogue, character actions, or thematic messaging are not in line with the author's vision or established characterization.

  • How to weave fae magick through plot and subplots so they flow well and have a satisfying resolution (if applicable).

A Detailed Read includes in-document comments addressing the above (and General Read) elements, a 2-4 page beta reader report listing structural elements to focus on in revisions, and a 1-2 page follow-up report with final suggestions after the second read-through.

Detailed Read Pricing

General Guideline

(rounded up after 500 words)

$0.005 per word

20k words — $100

30k words — $150

50k words — $250

70k words — $350

80k words — $400

These prices are guidelines to help estimate cost. Since each project is unique and requires different types/levels of beta reading, please contact me for an official quote. There is no obligation to hire me for requesting information.

Payment

After the beta reading agreement is signed, half of the total cost will be due before work begins, with the remainder due upon project completion (with the exception of projects under $100, which will be due as one payment at the beginning). Invoices will be emailed on both counts.

 

I do not charge taxes or service fees. The final quote I give is the only amount you will pay.

I accept payment through PayPal, but alternatives will be considered upon request.​​

Frequently Asked Questions

Contact

Contact me with any questions or beta reading requests below!

Thanks! I'll get back to you soon!

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Testimonials

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"Over the years, I've worked with many beta readers, and Jordan is one of the best. She understood the vision I had for my novel instantly and helped me see ways to realize it that I'd never thought of. With the advice she gave me, I'm excited to rewrite my novel and make it become what Jordan saw it could be."
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